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"The Water Knife" by Paolo Bacigalupi

6/9/2023

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Being a writer requires a lot of research, and that is not limited to doing content research for the next book. It’s also important to know what other writers in the genre are writing. I stumbled on The Windup Girl by Paolo Bacigalupi and the premise intrigued me. I noticed that the author took a current problem, just as I was doing in Sābanto, and accelerated that issue to create a dystopian world somewhere in the not-so-distant future. The characters in the book were navigating a cruel world where every human’s worth is measured by a unique scale, calories. The Windup Girl got my attention because of some of the similarities that I found between that book and Sābanto.

I had heard of The Water Knife by the same author and reached out for it as soon as I had a chance. I was not disappointed. The author immediately takes the reader to a new world where the Colorado river is drying up. Texas cities are gone due to the drought and a wave of refugees is trying to make ends meet in blistering Phoenix where water is more expensive than gas, hoping that one day, somehow, they will be allowed to move north where the grass is still green. The natural disaster has only been amplified by humans, their short-sightedness, inaction, greed and hunger for power. Gangs, outlaws and cults are trying to secure the kingdoms they have created for themselves while Nevada, Arizona and California are all in conflict over who gets the water, and how much.

There is, however, something unusual happening in Phoenix. A rich businessman has been killed, his body mutilated. Lucy, a journalist, and Angel, a man for hire, are looking for answers, however, the more they look the more confusing the story gets. When their paths cross they realize that the situation is grave and they need to find what the killers are looking for before they become victims themselves.

I have to say that Bacigalupi has become one of my favorite authors and I’m looking forward to reading his third novel as well. Why do I think that? 

  • Sābanto - When I was writing Sābanto, I envisioned it to be a story similar to those that Paolo Bacigalupi wrote. A story about a cruel world where no one is happy-go-lucky, because every success and survival is marked with sweat and blood. I could say that Bacigalupi not only serves as inspiration for me, but also as a writer that I can look up to.
  • Action - There is never a shortage of it in Bacigalupi’s books. Every way the characters turn there is a new danger that they need to overcome. Once the momentum is achieved, it keeps the readers on the edge of their seats. This is something that I strive to accomplish in my books.
  • World-building - There is a lot of it in Bacigalupi’s books. He transforms the reader to a new reality with ease. There are lots of details in the stories and new things about the world are revealed with every page. 

Spoilers Ahead:
  • Which character did you like the most?
    Maria is the character that really got my attention. We learn about Maria when she buys discounted water to sell to workers to make profit. What seems to her like a lucky day quickly turns into her worst nightmare. She goes through hell just to find out there is still a light at the end of the tunnel. She can get out of Phoenix, but at what cost?
  • Which scene did you like the most?
    There’s a scene where the city is being engulfed by a fire. That’s when you realize that the risks of a lack of water are not only thirst or lack of food and vegetation, but also the constant threat of fires. There is no place to run or hide when the fire is raging, destroying more and more buildings and refugee tents.
  • What didn’t you like about the book?
    Lucy is an interesting character, but during the torture scene she seems weak and scared. Of course we would all scream for the torture to end, but what struck me was how quickly she recovered from that experience. Surrounded by dead bodies, she mended her rescuer with what seemed like a smile on her face.
  • Overall notes
    I like the ending of the book and the moral questions it asks. In a world that’s falling apart, there are two paths to take. One is to return, to try and restore it to what it was and should have been. The second is to move forward and find a solution to the current situation. Which one is the correct one? Does the end justify the means? How passive can we remain if the decision is made by someone else?
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The best gift to give a writer

11/30/2022

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As the holidays approach, I often get the question “What would you like for Christmas? 

A few years ago I reached a stage in my life where I no longer knew what I wanted as a gift, or if I even wanted anything at all. I value the holidays as a time to unwind and catch up with family and friends. When the question of gifts comes up, I usually search my brain to come up with something that is not too expensive. I want to help the giver and save them the trouble of figuring it out on their own. As a new writer, I realized I might need something that I hadn’t thought of before, something that could help me become a better writer. I went to the internet for ideas.

Here are some funny ones that I found:
  1. Writer-themed clothes - Great for laundry day, but they should be warm and oversized.
  2. Alcohol - A perfect way to amplify the doubt and anxiety every author already has
  3. Candles - Might be useful for séances to contact the character the author had killed in a book
  4. Literary gadgets - Because everything can be commercialized.

We are all different, and some of the items found on general advice pages and forums on the internet might be exactly what some authors are looking for. I decided, however, to come up with my own list of what I think every author needs. Bonus: Some items are completely free. 

  1. If the author is published and you have not yet purchased the book for yourself, this is the perfect time to do so. Share the joy of grabbing a copy for yourself with the author.
  2. Buy their book as a gift for someone else who might enjoy it.
  3. Write a review of their book if you’ve finished reading it.
  4. Recommend the book to others.
  5. Tell the author why you liked their book.
  6. Join the author’s newsletter.
  7. Share the author's accomplishments with others.
  8. Follow them on social media and share their posts.
  9. Grab them gift cards from stores that carry stationery.
  10. Gift cards for places like Amazon or Google Books (full of help books, research material, and books to read for fun). Amazon gift cards are also great for the author to buy copies of their book for resale at a later time.
  11. Prepaid credit cards for unexpected expenses such as mailing fees, memberships, writing classes, and writing getaways. Also great for takeout.
  12. For writers with children, give them the gift of free time by offering to babysit.
  13. Donate to literary or social causes in their name.
  14. Keep an eye out for cheap or free opportunities for book sales, or book donations of gently used books.
  15. A book that is similar to one of the author’s books in theme or style. Authors like to compare their work with others, but finding books that are similar to their own is not easy and takes time. If you know of any that they have not read, they may appreciate a copy.

I hope you enjoy the practical ideas I came up with so far. Holidays are a time for fun, and no matter how big or small the gift is, the author will appreciate it. 

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Books and Competition

11/16/2022

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A sample household requires only one kettle. A prospective buyer will review the available options in a store and buy a model best suited to their needs. Once a kettle is selected, the rest of the available makes and models will probably be ignored for many years to come.

Furniture is similar. After some research and checking out a couch at a store to see if it’s comfy, a buyer will make a decision and then a purchase. Car shopping is the same; a buyer might have a favourite brand, but there is an expectation that such an expensive purchase will last for a long time.

These types of purchases often have tight competition, because the manufacturers and producers need to convince the buyer to choose their product, and not a product made by someone else. An opportunity to try to convince the buyer might not come again for years.

Books are more like fruit. A buyer may have certain favourites, but more often than not, they will still purchase other fruits regularly. A grocery store customer will look at the selection of fruits available and choose one that looks appealing. Price and freshness might be a factor in their decision; however, information about who grew it and where rarely make an impact. A buyer will also make fruit purchases often, in quantities higher than one, and will do so many times over the years from different suppliers.

A reader may also have favourite books, genres and authors, but, an avid reader will look outside these boundaries and pick other books as well. Purchasing one book does not prevent the reader from purchasing another one by a different author or from borrowing more books from a local library. This means that there is no real competition between authors and they can, and should, work together on honing their writing skills and strive to bring quality work to their readers.
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Beta Reading

11/9/2022

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I enlisted multiple beta readers for my manuscript in 2021, but this was the first time I had the chance to be a beta reader for someone else.

Jeff Farrell reached out to an online community I’m a part of asking for feedback from female beta readers. I jumped at the opportunity to gain some experience with beta reading and critique. It was exciting to read something that had never been published before.

As I waited for the manuscript to be sent to me, anxiety kicked in. What if I didn’t like the book at all? What if I didn’t feel it was up to standard? What feedback would I offer?

When I received a copy of Bad Blood, I opened it up at lunch and quickly became so immersed in the story that the thirty minutes flew by without me noticing.

Why should writers do beta reading?

As a writer, you have little opportunity to be part of the book development process outside of your own work. Your characters are great, you developed them well, the dialog is perfect — until a beta reader gives you feedback and shatters that view.

When you read someone else’s work, there’s an emotional separation from the story. Suddenly you start thinking like a writer, and that’s when your editor's voice begins to chime in about the pacing, flow and plot. You are able to point out issues and offer suggestions, reinforcing what you know and learned during your own writing process.

It makes you a better writer. Seeing other work in progress and in a different style than your own gives you an opportunity to reflect about your own style and voice. Reading and making notes refreshes the knowledge you have, thus imprinting it more strongly in your mind. I didn’t realize how much I’d learned during my publishing journey thus far, but being a beta reader helped me see how much knowledge I’d gained, and now I know that Book 2 of Sābanto will be of much better quality right from the start.

It also helps others become better writers. There is power in experience. You are not the first person to write a book, nor will you be the last. Other authors have helped guide you, and now that you’re getting your first book out the door, the roles are reversed and you have an opportunity to help new authors who are still on their journeys. Helping others creates community and improves the quality of self-published books.

Here is a brief review of the book:

Alex, the main character and a narrator, feels like a failure. He’s lost his job as a journalist, and with nowhere to go, he’s remained in the place he knows best, Caracas, Venezuela. With his money running out, there is nothing else to do but to spend his time drinking at a rooftop bar called Mirador. He could go back home to Ireland, but some wounds should never be opened again. When he learns, however, that his brother has died in Caracas, he begins a quest to learn the truth about his death.


From the very first lines of the book, the reader is hooked. You start reading and they start shooting. It leaves you hungry for more. Alex is navigating the corruption of the dictatorship-led country to gather information, but as a gringo (a white man), he is facing a wall of distrust and disinformation. He seeks help from a local, a reporter Gina, who senses there’s more to the story than simply a plastic surgery gone wrong. She takes a risk and jumps at the chance to fight the regime. 

Based on actual events and Jeff’s personal experiences during the time he spent in Venezuela as a journalist, the book provides detailed descriptions of Caracas and its people, transporting the reader there with ease. The author also very accurately describes the socio-political scene in a country that is deteriorating due to corruption, authoritarianism, crime and poverty. His clever use of Spanish words in the text is a constant reminder of where the book takes place and the surrounding atmosphere of this South American country.

I’d recommend this book to anyone looking for a quick read with lots of action, and those for whom justice and social equality are worth fighting for.  

The book is currently on pre-order and is expected to be available in 2023. Website link:
https://www.jefffarrellonline.com/
https://www.amazon.com/Bad-Blood-Alex-Regan-Thriller-ebook

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